- Using the Checklist for Style, revise the following text.
- Identify 2 or more style problems in the textand suggest ways to improve them to enhance the text readability
- (Hint: use the example on page 103 as a model for revision.)
Memo to employees
We are presently awaiting an on-site inspection of the designated professional library location by corporate representatives relative to electrical adaptations necessary for the computer installation. Meanwhile, all staff members are asked to respect the off-limits designation of the aforementioned location, as requested,due to the liability insurance provisions in regard to the computer